Twokinds smutfic: Establishing Relations [NSFW] (COMPLETE)

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Twokinds smutfic: Establishing Relations [NSFW] (COMPLETE)

#1 Post by amenon » Tue Dec 25, 2018 10:11 pm

Happy Candlenights! Here's the latest I've been working on. I'm not quite done yet, but I'm currently trying to get the whole thing out over the holidays -- my present to my 2019 self. We'll see how that goes, but... here's what I have out so far, out of 6 chapters and an epilogue! Job done!

What if things had gone a little differently around chapter 12 of the comic?

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#2 Post by TheMouse » Thu Dec 27, 2018 5:58 am

Ooooh, new Amenon things to read!

Update: finished chapter 1 before bed. Will absolutely be reading chapter 2 tomorrow. And sending links to some friends. I know I'm an easy mark when it comes to a certain larger than life Basitin, but there's more to it than that.
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#3 Post by amenon » Thu Dec 27, 2018 6:24 pm

Chapter 3 out now! See OP. I don't necessarily bump the thread every time I update, so do check back once a day or so for new chapters. Or reply and say something, because then I have a reason to bump :P

TheMouse wrote:
Thu Dec 27, 2018 5:58 am
Ooooh, new Amenon things to read!

Update: finished chapter 1 before bed. Will absolutely be reading chapter 2 tomorrow. And sending links to some friends. I know I'm an easy mark when it comes to a certain larger than life Basitin, but there's more to it than that.
Yay! Thank you very much! :grin:

I would get a kick out of it if you kept me posted on your thoughts and progress, but obviously you don't gotta. Glad you liked the first chapter!
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#4 Post by TheMouse » Thu Dec 27, 2018 7:25 pm

amenon wrote:
Thu Dec 27, 2018 6:24 pm
TheMouse wrote:
Thu Dec 27, 2018 5:58 am
Ooooh, new Amenon things to read!

Update: finished chapter 1 before bed. Will absolutely be reading chapter 2 tomorrow. And sending links to some friends. I know I'm an easy mark when it comes to a certain larger than life Basitin, but there's more to it than that.
Yay! Thank you very much! :grin:

I would get a kick out of it if you kept me posted on your thoughts and progress, but obviously you don't gotta. Glad you liked the first chapter!
If you want writer's critique kind of stuff, I can refer someone who's qualified to give it, but if you want my own, inexpert reactions?

Chapter one does an excellent job of laying characterization for our intrepid heroes the trio of "diplomats", and establishing motivations. Natani has the hots for Keith, duh, and we get to enjoy the conflicted inner monologue there. Adelaide is, as Natani puts it, very "kingy" and you all know how much I love that. And Keith is... Keith. Awkward, adorkable, Keith.
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#5 Post by amenon » Mon Dec 31, 2018 5:50 pm

TheMouse wrote:
Thu Dec 27, 2018 7:25 pm
If you want writer's critique kind of stuff, I can refer someone who's qualified to give it, but if you want my own, inexpert reactions?

Chapter one does an excellent job of laying characterization for our intrepid heroes the trio of "diplomats", and establishing motivations. Natani has the hots for Keith, duh, and we get to enjoy the conflicted inner monologue there. Adelaide is, as Natani puts it, very "kingy" and you all know how much I love that. And Keith is... Keith. Awkward, adorkable, Keith.
Easily the best thing about writing, for me, is knowing that people are out there reading my stuff and reacting to it. So it's really just whatever comes to your mind that I want to hear. So thank you :grin:


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