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#63 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Hey guys im posting this because book one of The Hybrid is almost over. Yes it will end after chapter 10.
Next book wil start shortly after i end book one. kk

Thank you for reading and thank you for making views of my story reach over a thousand. It makes me feel good to know i have fans who like my stories.

Sincerely - Maakisu Suzaki
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Oh and the rest of chap nine will be out by the end of this weekend. I hope....
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#67 Post by Nina »

cant wait to see what happens keep doing good maakisu <3 <3 hope to see more from you and good luck bud.
Maakisu my love you will forever be mine. xoxoxo.

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thanx and i will uhm ......<3 thingy i think..... ._,
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#70 Post by Silly Zealot »

There is a typo there: it should say "discusting" not "discussing". Also, you have to delete that half-censored swear word, the moderators can ban you for trying to bypass the swear filter in the forums.
Oh, and make a few more jokes on your bonus shorts (and also in your bonus jeans!... hehe.. get it? shorts? jeans? nevermind) I know you can improve them and make them more interesting.
Because not all overly religious zealots are forum trolls.

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#71 Post by Nina »

oh be quiet you dont tell him how to right his shorts Maakisu i think they're fine your doing a good job they are funny enough. and silly shut up, they are plenty interesting. maakisu go with your comfort level if he doesn't like it he stop reading your story write it and the shorts how you want them to be kk. ;)
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#72 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Thanks Mila That was sweet but I don't think that it's quite necessary for you to defend me. And I'm not sure if what he said was really supposed to be ill written in any way. I think it was just constructive criticism.
But don't worry I'll stick to how I write. If he wants better, he can read something else.
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#73 Post by Silly Zealot »

Buuuaaah, people think I'm being offensive! Buaaaaahh! QQ
But speaking seriously, I'm just posting because I like reading this story and I thought you originally made the shorts for comedic purposes and out of character situations to entretain the readers, but I don't know if that is really what they are there for.
It also makes me sad that the new chapter is fragmented because I don't know how it will end and poor Carver is yet to make an appereance, so he is probably sad too!
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#74 Post by TinyVoices »

Maakisu Suzaki wrote:"Eeeeeep, what are you doing Buck, stop licking me that's extremely uncomfortable."
Dirty mind. :P

... Actually, in all seriousness I don't think anyone would really feel all that comfortable being licked behind the ears...

Edit: Anyone who is an anthropoid, at least.

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#75 Post by Nina »

ok first off yes he does have a dirty mind. (if i know him well enough his mind is quite twisted. second you'd be amazed at what some people are uncomfortable with for instace i would find it uncomfortable if you licked the back of my ears, besides its just plain destubing. third off chapter nine spacy cause of all the home work we have to do. (me and him have an irl friendship and we go to the same school. he's in tenth, he should be jr. but he was held back he missed too many days of school im a jr. btw yay me. but yeah hes probably gonna fix that as soon as he finishes chap 9 so calm your horses.

P.S. love ya maakisu -kiss on the cheek- :flora: :potatoes:
Maakisu my love you will forever be mine. xoxoxo.

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