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- The Inkwell Coyote
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Re: Twokinds needs your help!
Unless he's fighting for an idea that he no longer has, I'd say "consider right" is the better option.
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For today's page:
Shouldn't it be "What's that?" (first panel), needing a capital? (And shouldn't "Mongrel" (penultimate panel) be lower case?)
Shouldn't it be "What's that?" (first panel), needing a capital? (And shouldn't "Mongrel" (penultimate panel) be lower case?)
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Don't know if anyone has caught this but the released 1rst edition 2kinds book has a one spelling error. I guess it would pass for comic 53 chapter 3 in the archives but it's a small panel not included in comic 53, but listed in the book. The part where Flora voluntarily binds her hands to appear as though she's not a free keidran because free keidran are not permitted access to that human town.
"Free keidran are not aloud in this city. It's the only way." Allowed I believe is the correct spelling.
"Free keidran are not aloud in this city. It's the only way." Allowed I believe is the correct spelling.
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Yes, yes you are correct sir.QuothTheRaven wrote:Don't know if anyone has caught this but the released 1rst edition 2kinds book has a one spelling error. I guess it would pass for comic 53 chapter 3 in the archives but it's a small panel not included in comic 53, but listed in the book. The part where Flora voluntarily binds her hands to appear as though she's not a free keidran because free keidran are not permitted access to that human town.
"Free keidran are not aloud in this city. It's the only way." Allowed I believe is the correct spelling.
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Post any errors you found in the book in this topic please:
http://2kinds.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=9417
And it seems this one has already been pointed out ^^.
http://2kinds.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=9417
And it seems this one has already been pointed out ^^.
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Actually, when a sentence opens with an ellipsis (...), the first letter of the first word is commonly written in lowercase.Fireball0236 wrote:For today's page:
Shouldn't it be "What's that?" (first panel), needing a capital? (And shouldn't "Mongrel" (penultimate panel) be lower case?)
Additionally, "Mongrel" is being used to address Laura. As a proper noun in this case, it is correctly capitalized.
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wait, I just realise, isn't this a topic best suited for the Comic board?
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True, but it's more of an announcement than a topic. Not sure if they can be moved as easily.
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Announcements just seem to be super-sticky'd topics. If Nanaki can make an announcement that spans over all of the boards, I'm sure it's easy enough to just move it over to the comic board.
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For the comic for Februrary 4th, 2009, in Kat's comment, "want's" should not have an apostrophe (it should just be "Eric wants you to..."). Also, I believe that "Guys" should have a lowercase "g" instead of a capital, though I'm not 100% confident that is the case.
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The intelligence general's line does not read well; I believe 'scholar' is misused in this context.
Alternate phrasings: 'men of scholarship', 'both scholarly men,' or even "men of learning" would work.
Alternate phrasings: 'men of scholarship', 'both scholarly men,' or even "men of learning" would work.
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...or we are both men of the arts, men of science, eruditely men, bookish men, educated men and literately men.Wynni wrote:The intelligence general's line does not read well; I believe 'scholar' is misused in this context.
Alternate phrasings: 'men of scholarship', 'both scholarly men,' or even "men of learning" would work.
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Fix'd.j004y wrote: erudite men literate men.
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Today's update, it's skirmish not skermish. Middle panel.
If I am to be cast in the role of the villain, my dear, I would be a fool to give up my advantage.