Dark's Art Realm November 14 2016 Update
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Re: Dark's Art Realm I DREW SOMETHING 12 Sep, 2014
I want to be honest. I like your painting, really.
And because you want a constructive critique, I´ll say the only thing that doesn´t fit is the way how the head joints the neck. Not only the head is a bit small for the neck you draw, but also because they look ``separated´´. Like: one ends, the other begins. There has to be a progressive change between them.
Hope it helps, sorry if this critique looks harsh. I really think you are good, you should continue practising.
And because you want a constructive critique, I´ll say the only thing that doesn´t fit is the way how the head joints the neck. Not only the head is a bit small for the neck you draw, but also because they look ``separated´´. Like: one ends, the other begins. There has to be a progressive change between them.
Hope it helps, sorry if this critique looks harsh. I really think you are good, you should continue practising.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm I DREW SOMETHING 12 Sep, 2014
You're fine, it was what I was looking for. Thanks for the help.Damien203 wrote:sorry if this critique looks harsh.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm I DREW SOMETHING 12 Sep, 2014
Just a little update, I started working on another drawing. This time I will not color over it, so the only thing you'll be seeing is the drawing itself.
I will be going into territory that I had the hardest time on before, which is why I am doing this, to grow as an artist.
I expect it to be up between now and next week. If not, I got lazy and decided to do something else instead of drawing.
EDIT: It's done, just need to find time to upload it
I will be going into territory that I had the hardest time on before, which is why I am doing this, to grow as an artist.
I expect it to be up between now and next week. If not, I got lazy and decided to do something else instead of drawing.
EDIT: It's done, just need to find time to upload it
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Re: Dark's Art Realm I DREW SOMETHING 12 Sep, 2014
Here it is, an anthro version of my scailsona (since my scailsona is a full dragon, not anthro)
Again, please tell me what I need to do better.
Things I already know I need to work on:
Hands & feet
Hair
To me he seems a little bit scrawny, but then again, so am I in real life.
Again, please tell me what I need to do better.
Things I already know I need to work on:
Hands & feet
Hair
To me he seems a little bit scrawny, but then again, so am I in real life.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm I DREW SOMETHING 12 Sep, 2014
That's pretty good as it is.
If you want some constructive criticism, though, I'd say separate the wings. As it is, they look attatched to each other, and off to one side.
If you want some constructive criticism, though, I'd say separate the wings. As it is, they look attatched to each other, and off to one side.
Gearhead mechanic in the digital era, who will probably grow up is in the process of growing up to be a very grumpy old man.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 3 Oct, 2014
Here's a little something I'm working n. It's a WIP, and plan on adding many things.
The bottom row of teeth definitely need some re-doing.
Shading will be added later, since I plan on having something that would affect it.
The bottom row of teeth definitely need some re-doing.
Shading will be added later, since I plan on having something that would affect it.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 22 Nov 2014
I just had this idea from a pun I also thought of, and figured it would be easy to do in photoshop.
Poorly done, and not to be taken seriously, as it's a joke
I give you...
Poorly done, and not to be taken seriously, as it's a joke
I give you...
Spoiler!
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 22 Nov 2014
I'd like to meet this guy. Nice edit, quite clean.DarkTheImmortal wrote:I just had this idea from a pun I also thought of, and figured it would be easy to do in photoshop.
Poorly done, and not to be taken seriously, as it's a joke
I give you...Spoiler!
Gearhead mechanic in the digital era, who will probably grow up is in the process of growing up to be a very grumpy old man.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 08 Feb 2015
I mentioned I was making a song in the smile thread. Well, here it is. It's the first song I made that I made every single part of, not using others' loops or anything. That being said, it's a little minimalistic, but for some reason, many like minimalist music. It's simple, short, and calming.
I present to you, DarkTheImmortal - Beyond the Horizon
I present to you, DarkTheImmortal - Beyond the Horizon
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 08 Feb 2015
Sounds good Dark! Did you had some inspiration from: ''Act on instinct''?DarkTheImmortal wrote:I mentioned I was making a song in the smile thread. Well, here it is. It's the first song I made that I made every single part of, not using others' loops or anything. That being said, it's a little minimalistic, but for some reason, many like minimalist music. It's simple, short, and calming.
I present to you, DarkTheImmortal - Beyond the Horizon
Because, it reminded me of that song. Keep ze sound wurk up!
*fail german is fail*
The communist part is a inside-joke with friends.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 08 Feb 2015
Never heard of it, so no.Tesla Foxtrot wrote:Did you had some inspiration from: ''Act on instinct''?
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 08 Feb 2015
Damit... oh wellDarkTheImmortal wrote:Never heard of it, so no.Tesla Foxtrot wrote:Did you had some inspiration from: ''Act on instinct''?
The communist part is a inside-joke with friends.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm 16 Feb 2015 Music Update
So, after noticing I have many unfinished projects and not remembering where I was going with them, and having not post anything here for a while, I decided to make a small piece that will be a quick start-finish thing.
Unfortunately Photobucket isn't working (Because I don't feel like uploading it to Deviantart), so I can't upload it just yet. I will try to get it up as soon as possible.
Unfortunately Photobucket isn't working (Because I don't feel like uploading it to Deviantart), so I can't upload it just yet. I will try to get it up as soon as possible.
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Re: Dark's Art Realm
Apparently Photobucket did upload the image, it just didn't say it finished, so I have many copies of it that Photobucket won't delete because it hates me. But here it is
Spoiler!
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Re: Dark's Art Realm January 2016 Update
It's adorable.
Haven't tried imgur or other hosting site yet?
Haven't tried imgur or other hosting site yet?