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#91 Post by Nyghtsworn »

So I started rereading the story in my free time and caught my eye for whatever reason. The human being killed in this dream sequence http://twokindscomic.com/?p=14 says "God no" i.e. singular 'God'. Whereas in recent comics characters refer to the "Gods" i.e. plural 'Gods', i'll use the current voter incentive as reference. http://topwebcomics.com/vote/138/default.aspx.

It's a really minor type-o and it might not even be a mistake, but it caught my eye for some reason and I thought i'd post it here.
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#92 Post by bridgebrain »

Someone may have already caught this, but seeing as its 1 AM and I still have a paper to do for tomorrow and don't have the energy to read 20 pages, http://twokindscomic.com/?p=205 Panel 6: "arond" should be "around"
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#93 Post by catldr24 »

Today's comic.

'unparalize' should be 'unparalyze.'
'I'm supposed to a bloody assassin' needs 'be' between 'to' and 'a'.
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#94 Post by C_Death »

http://twokindscomic.com/?p=466
It's not a typo, but somone pointed out that Evals is missing his wrist shackles in the last panel
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#95 Post by FastChapter »

That, and the bed goes from a double to a single between the last few panels.

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#96 Post by Fireball0236 »

The current page, from 5 Dec 2008, 4th panel, second half text balloon. You missed an ">" at the end of what Natani is saying.
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#97 Post by Zylar »

First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
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#98 Post by C_Death »

Zylar wrote:First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
Eric is the only human there, shouldn't it be singular? "Where's the human?"
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#99 Post by Zylar »

Humans is plural and it's hard to tell who'd asking the question...
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#100 Post by Fireball0236 »

Just to point out that the panel from Dec 5 hasn't been corrected so far. And is still blurry.
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#101 Post by Zylar »

Comic from Dec, 11, 2008: In the 2nd panel it should be "fascinating"
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#102 Post by avengedplatypus »

C_Death wrote:
Zylar wrote:First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
Eric is the only human there, shouldn't it be singular? "Where's the human?"
trance and eric are humans
they were talking about more than one human.

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#103 Post by AzeNaku »

avengedplatypus wrote:
C_Death wrote:
Zylar wrote:First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
Eric is the only human there, shouldn't it be singular? "Where's the human?"
trance and eric are humans
they were talking about more than one human.
trace isn't there
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#104 Post by Fireball0236 »

Even if they did mean both Trace and Eric, it currently states "Where's the humans?", which isn't correct either way.

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Painseeker wrote:Has anybody noticed the error in this page?
Tom hasn't included the < and > to indicate that they're speaking in Keidran

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In the comic of Dec 20, 2008; 5th panel. "She was a failed experiment."

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EDIT: Comic of Dec 20, 2008 has been fixed. The one from Dec 5 still awaits a fix ^^.
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#105 Post by Fireball0236 »

Pardon the double post, but it has been a while.
Fireball0236 wrote:One question though, "(...) for what I considered to be right!", he no longer considers it right then?
Two other people seem to agree this probably is a mistake, so posting it here.
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