Twokinds needs your help!
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- Nyghtsworn
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Re: Twokinds needs your help!
So I started rereading the story in my free time and caught my eye for whatever reason. The human being killed in this dream sequence http://twokindscomic.com/?p=14 says "God no" i.e. singular 'God'. Whereas in recent comics characters refer to the "Gods" i.e. plural 'Gods', i'll use the current voter incentive as reference. http://topwebcomics.com/vote/138/default.aspx.
It's a really minor type-o and it might not even be a mistake, but it caught my eye for some reason and I thought i'd post it here.
It's a really minor type-o and it might not even be a mistake, but it caught my eye for some reason and I thought i'd post it here.
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Someone may have already caught this, but seeing as its 1 AM and I still have a paper to do for tomorrow and don't have the energy to read 20 pages, http://twokindscomic.com/?p=205 Panel 6: "arond" should be "around"
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Re: Twokinds needs your help!
Today's comic.
'unparalize' should be 'unparalyze.'
'I'm supposed to a bloody assassin' needs 'be' between 'to' and 'a'.
'unparalize' should be 'unparalyze.'
'I'm supposed to a bloody assassin' needs 'be' between 'to' and 'a'.
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http://twokindscomic.com/?p=466
It's not a typo, but somone pointed out that Evals is missing his wrist shackles in the last panel
It's not a typo, but somone pointed out that Evals is missing his wrist shackles in the last panel
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That, and the bed goes from a double to a single between the last few panels.
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The current page, from 5 Dec 2008, 4th panel, second half text balloon. You missed an ">" at the end of what Natani is saying.
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First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
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Eric is the only human there, shouldn't it be singular? "Where's the human?"Zylar wrote:First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
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Humans is plural and it's hard to tell who'd asking the question...
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Just to point out that the panel from Dec 5 hasn't been corrected so far. And is still blurry.
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Comic from Dec, 11, 2008: In the 2nd panel it should be "fascinating"
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Re: Twokinds needs your help!
trance and eric are humansC_Death wrote:Eric is the only human there, shouldn't it be singular? "Where's the human?"Zylar wrote:First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
they were talking about more than one human.
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trace isn't thereavengedplatypus wrote:trance and eric are humansC_Death wrote:Eric is the only human there, shouldn't it be singular? "Where's the human?"Zylar wrote:First panel, should be "where are the humans?".
they were talking about more than one human.
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Even if they did mean both Trace and Eric, it currently states "Where's the humans?", which isn't correct either way.
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In the comic of Dec 20, 2008; 5th panel. "She was a failed experiment."
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EDIT: Comic of Dec 20, 2008 has been fixed. The one from Dec 5 still awaits a fix ^^.
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---Painseeker wrote:Has anybody noticed the error in this page?
Tom hasn't included the < and > to indicate that they're speaking in Keidran
Sorry if it's been mentioned
In the comic of Dec 20, 2008; 5th panel. "She was a failed experiment."
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EDIT: Comic of Dec 20, 2008 has been fixed. The one from Dec 5 still awaits a fix ^^.
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Pardon the double post, but it has been a while.
Two other people seem to agree this probably is a mistake, so posting it here.Fireball0236 wrote:One question though, "(...) for what I considered to be right!", he no longer considers it right then?