The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story

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Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story

#661 Post by foxlord »

Late to the party, and I'm going to get a lot of hate for commenting, but well done Schro on the writing. This is also a record for myself, if I disappear for months again, I want a bookmark to see where I left off haha
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#662 Post by Schrodinger »

foxlord wrote: Sun Aug 05, 2018 9:15 pm Late to the party, and I'm going to get a lot of hate for commenting, but well done Schro on the writing. This is also a record for myself, if I disappear for months again, I want a bookmark to see where I left off haha
Thanks for the compliment, foxlord. I'm thinking that I'll have to change the narrative perspective if I were to make another vignette. Writing in first-person just isn't my style.
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#663 Post by Twippit »

Boy, it'd be nice if this was an update!
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#664 Post by Twippit »

*pokes dead corpse*
Hey. Been a while. I'm on discord at Twippit#9645. See ya around sometime, maybe.

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Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story

#665 Post by TheMouse »

Twippit wrote: Sat Jul 25, 2020 11:57 pm *pokes dead corpse*
Please don't. In addition to double posting and necroposting, making this pop up as new replies is just plain cruel.
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