The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story

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#16 Post by Nuff »

Lol that was gooooood

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#17 Post by avengedplatypus »

Very Nice, I loved it, especially the "NOOB" Gang.

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#18 Post by FastChapter »

TheSpiffman wrote:Oh God I can't stop laughing.

Superb, just superb. I can't help but imagine diffent forum members as their Noir counterparts now. Fastchapter as a corrupt police officer in the cities vice department keeps popping up :grin:
:D Corrupt cop? Ah well, if it gets me in uniform, why not, XD

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#19 Post by [Yokel] »

Gotta love a man in uniform.
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#20 Post by Trabian »

Awesome.

Nice description and a good mood throughout the text.

The people want more. :mrgreen:
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#21 Post by Nuff »

FastChapter wrote:
TheSpiffman wrote:Oh God I can't stop laughing.

Superb, just superb. I can't help but imagine diffent forum members as their Noir counterparts now. Fastchapter as a corrupt police officer in the cities vice department keeps popping up :grin:
:D Corrupt cop? Ah well, if it gets me in uniform, why not, XD
Well half a uniform. We all know you won't wear the pants ;)

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#22 Post by Kinuki »

Nuff wrote:
FastChapter wrote:
TheSpiffman wrote:Oh God I can't stop laughing.

Superb, just superb. I can't help but imagine diffent forum members as their Noir counterparts now. Fastchapter as a corrupt police officer in the cities vice department keeps popping up :grin:
:D Corrupt cop? Ah well, if it gets me in uniform, why not, XD
Well half a uniform. We all know you won't wear the pants ;)
Now that's my kind of uniform. Woo! :D
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#23 Post by FastChapter »

;) They're always too tight anyways. S'why they give most cops desks!

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#24 Post by TheSpiffman »

FastChapter wrote:;) They're always too tight anyways. S'why they give most cops desks!

I can never go to the police station again now :shock:
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#25 Post by Wynni »

Ah Avie, I must now find my old Bogey collection.

Loooooove it.
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#26 Post by laseki »

God this idea just screams "DRAW ME!",guess i just cheesy detective dramas.

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#27 Post by shneekeythelost »

Now I'm tempted to post the story I had written in the noir style, although instead of being a gumshoe, he was a bouncer.

Love how this is going, though.

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#28 Post by avwolf »

shneekeythelost wrote:Now I'm tempted to post the story I had written in the noir style, although instead of being a gumshoe, he was a bouncer.
Dooo it!

Going to try to write up the next "chapter" on the laptop while I'm at the folks' for Christmas. We'll see how that works out.
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#29 Post by shneekeythelost »

avwolf wrote:
shneekeythelost wrote:Now I'm tempted to post the story I had written in the noir style, although instead of being a gumshoe, he was a bouncer.
Dooo it!
Well, don't say I didn't warn you...

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#30 Post by Verilidaine »

Hee! Love <3

I'm on the edge of my seat for the next installment. It's very clever and really draws you into that style :)
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