The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
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Lol that was gooooood
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Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
Very Nice, I loved it, especially the "NOOB" Gang.
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Corrupt cop? Ah well, if it gets me in uniform, why not, XDTheSpiffman wrote:Oh God I can't stop laughing.
Superb, just superb. I can't help but imagine diffent forum members as their Noir counterparts now. Fastchapter as a corrupt police officer in the cities vice department keeps popping up
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Gotta love a man in uniform.
Go vertical.
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Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
Awesome.
Nice description and a good mood throughout the text.
The people want more.
Nice description and a good mood throughout the text.
The people want more.
Growing old is obligatory,
Growing up is optional.
If Waaagh ain't helpin wif yer problem, you is not using enuf.
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Growing up is optional.
If Waaagh ain't helpin wif yer problem, you is not using enuf.
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Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
Well half a uniform. We all know you won't wear the pantsFastChapter wrote:Corrupt cop? Ah well, if it gets me in uniform, why not, XDTheSpiffman wrote:Oh God I can't stop laughing.
Superb, just superb. I can't help but imagine diffent forum members as their Noir counterparts now. Fastchapter as a corrupt police officer in the cities vice department keeps popping up
Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
Now that's my kind of uniform. Woo!Nuff wrote:Well half a uniform. We all know you won't wear the pantsFastChapter wrote:Corrupt cop? Ah well, if it gets me in uniform, why not, XDTheSpiffman wrote:Oh God I can't stop laughing.
Superb, just superb. I can't help but imagine diffent forum members as their Noir counterparts now. Fastchapter as a corrupt police officer in the cities vice department keeps popping up
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They're always too tight anyways. S'why they give most cops desks!
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FastChapter wrote: They're always too tight anyways. S'why they give most cops desks!
I can never go to the police station again now
Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
Ah Avie, I must now find my old Bogey collection.
Loooooove it.
Loooooove it.
Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
God this idea just screams "DRAW ME!",guess i just cheesy detective dramas.
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Re: The Bleak Streets of Twokinds: A Twokinds Forum Noir Story
Now I'm tempted to post the story I had written in the noir style, although instead of being a gumshoe, he was a bouncer.
Love how this is going, though.
Love how this is going, though.
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Dooo it!shneekeythelost wrote:Now I'm tempted to post the story I had written in the noir style, although instead of being a gumshoe, he was a bouncer.
Going to try to write up the next "chapter" on the laptop while I'm at the folks' for Christmas. We'll see how that works out.
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Well, don't say I didn't warn you...avwolf wrote:Dooo it!shneekeythelost wrote:Now I'm tempted to post the story I had written in the noir style, although instead of being a gumshoe, he was a bouncer.
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Hee! Love <3
I'm on the edge of my seat for the next installment. It's very clever and really draws you into that style
I'm on the edge of my seat for the next installment. It's very clever and really draws you into that style