Desire For Orders: Submission to Authority

[TheSpiffman]

Ah ha! Fellatio!

...

I feel dirty now.

[avwolf]

Wait, you only feel dirty now? Obviously I didn't do a good enough job with the fanfic. And I felt so dirty writing it, I was so certain it'd make other people feel dirty too...

[TheSpiffman]

I am very resiliant to the dirty feeling I'll have you know, what with my almost absent libido. However, when I say somthing in plain and blunt language, then I start to feel dirty. Now If Ihad comment on your story with "Lolz, keith does Alaric in the butt" then I would feel dirty.

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I feel dirty again...

[Fatalcrash]

I suggest Quik-E-Clean detergent mouthwash. Industrial strength.

[Kinuki]

In case my avatar, signature, and numerous conversations haven't made it clear, I am a total whore for Keith x Alaric lovin'.

:O

For the record, Kinuki did not smile like a donut in exchange for the production of this fanfiction.

Yep, av's right. I didn't perform fellatio on him.

We just humped like bunnies all night long. Where do you guys think the inspiration came for this, hm? Hmmmm?

[TheSpiffman]

(Shameless in-joke)

Carla approves of this

[Sable Dove]

For the record, Kinuki did not smile like a donut in exchange for the production of this fanfiction.

Yep, av's right. I didn't perform fellatio on him.

We just humped like bunnies all night long. Where do you guys think the inspiration came for this, hm? Hmmmm?

Like bunnies? For one whole night? That's terrible bunny-style humping. If it doesn't last at least 36 hours, it doesn't count as the real deal.

But back on topic. I was kinda surprised that Keith was on top. It just seems odd to me. Keith strikes me as a 'bottom' character if you know what I mean. And I know you do.

[avwolf]

But back on topic. I was kinda surprised that Keith was on top. It just seems odd to me. Keith strikes me as a 'bottom' character if you know what I mean. And I know you do.

Really, he is. But how often does Alaric get anybody to top him? I mean, hey, he's the Master General. Nearly every Basitin alive is subserviant to him. Honestly, it's for plot reasons -- Bottom's the position that requires quite a bit more readiness, from a psychological standpoint. Alaric seduced Keith this far, but he's holding back until he's sure that Keith's ready. You'll get your fix in the second segment, I promise. Provided that the freaking muse comes back and I can get back to writing.

Carla approves of this

Of course she does. We've been printing up Kinuki's dreams for use as "mango" for some time.

[TheSpiffman]

Provided that the freaking muse comes back and I can get back to writing.

I suggest voodoo magic to bind her spirit with unholy sorcery and fell promises. That seems to work.


Also, I need to keep a closer eye on my characters if they're doing things like that

[Frostflame]

I would've see the white dragon (Nora if I remember correctly) doing an illusion spell on Natani it make her look like a boy so she could join in the action XD. Never though Alaric wanted him this bad o.O

[Sapphwolf]

Ah ha! Fellatio!

...

I feel dirty now.

Here, use this. I'm told they help.

Provided that the freaking muse comes back and I can get back to writing.

I suggest voodoo magic to bind her spirit with unholy sorcery and fell promises. That seems to work.


Also, I need to keep a closer eye on my characters if they're doing things like that

Regrettably, his muse comes in the form of Pandora, and hasn't been helpful lately for anyone. I suggested he turn to the massive music collection he already has, but apparently if he looks for a song for inspiration then it doesn't work. It has to sneak up on him and hit him over the head with the big bad of awful.

I would've see the white dragon (Nora if I remember correctly) doing an illusion spell on Natani ti make her look like a boy so she could join in the action XD. Never though Alaric wanted him this bad o.O

You don't make a life size statue, in the round, and almost completely naked unless you want them REAL bad.

[GD]

Here, use this. I'm told they help.

You know, at first I didn't realize it was from Men In Black and was really creeped out :/

[avwolf]

You know, at first I didn't realize it was from Men In Black and was really creeped out :/

That's okay, it'd be more useful for that than for what they used it for in the movie. Because, you know, if it worked, you couldn't go to a dance club without forgetting where you lived. And wedding photos would get awkward when the wedding party forgot that they'd ever met.

[GD]

That's okay, it'd be more useful for that than for what they used it for in the movie. Because, you know, if it worked, you couldn't go to a dance club without forgetting where you lived. And wedding photos would get awkward when the wedding party forgot that they'd ever met.

Heh. It's extremely off topic, but that reminded me of this Flight of the Conchords video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mlYkIJVguCU

[avwolf]

Alright guys, I want a little reader input, if I could.

Do I keep on going like I am, and produce the second section in one big mess some eight months from now; or do I release it in "chapters," so that you all have something to keep you up at night? (In horror or otherwise. )

Also, while I consciously kept Laura out of this first section, that was because we didn't know anything about her during the period that I wrote most of the content. Do you think I should bring Laura into the story, and give her the opportunity to actually make this a love "wreck-tangle?"

I can't promise anything about the second sex scene (I've got that sketched out in my head already), or about a Natani/Laura scene later (which is possible, but I honestly think I'd rather a Natani/Stalker scene, partly because Natani likes blondes and partly because Katy Perry's song would be the primary drive for it, and the protagonist of the song doesn't "even know [her] name" ). But since we know the character now, and even in the fanfic she's looking for Keith, she should probably show up. What's the general opinion?