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#76 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

ACK! your kiss burns! how dare you Mila, I am part Basitin for god's sake. have you no decency?. Ahhh PDA on a grand scale.
You no show affection for me. It is against Basitin law while in the presence of others.
ok going to write rest of chap nine today hopefully.
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#77 Post by TinyVoices »

Nina wrote:second you'd be amazed at what some people are uncomfortable with for instace i would find it uncomfortable if you licked the back of my ears, besides its just plain destubing.
I did mean that licking would be weird. It would be uncomfortable to be licked. Are we on the same page or no? Idk, just sounds like you thought I said the opposite...

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#78 Post by Nina »

:karen: :kathrin: :flora: :natani: :raine: :nora: :mrgreen: Oh maakisu i cant believe your holding off on everyone. i still want to know how Buck killed Kaiya's x-master. you kinda left that haning bud enlighten us cause i wanna know what had taken place back in those woods. plus didn't i hear you tell me soething about buck having an uncontrolabl abilitty or am i wrong. plus you drop my charcter Moon completely out of the picture. BRING HER BACK i think most of us wanna know more about how Moon came to be a big part in the story. also GET TO FINISHING chapter nine god damn it. you lazy bum. :) come on ill help you plan the final part in chap nine. ;) hehe.
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#80 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

im kidding that is not an accurate short.
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#81 Post by Silly Zealot »

Buck killed the bad guy back in chapter 1, remember?
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#82 Post by Nina »

yeah but we dontknow exactly WHAT happened who did the blood curtling scream come from how did buck manage to kill a man twice his size and weight who was also that much faster and stronger than buck plus i remeber that look that buck gave kaiya baically that means something happened that buck didn't want kaiya to see.

btw Maakisu i like your new avatar its pretty cool
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#84 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

edit- fixed unconnected part of chap nine now on page 4 going to continue rest of chap nine on page four OR editing post full chapter on next post + deleting chap nine on page 4 and replacing on next post.
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#87 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Hey mila could you finish chap nine for me cause im really busy right now with a lot of stuff. thanx
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#88 Post by Nina »

uhm Maakisu im not sure if thats a good idea but here goes
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#89 Post by Nina »

edit out
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#90 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

ok fully revised and edited chapter nine and by the way Mila edit your section out kk. dont worry i give all credit to last portion of chap nine to you.


After all this: Thank you Mila
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