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#46 Post by TinyVoices »

Maakisu Suzaki wrote:What fourth wall?
In the idea of a play, where there is the back of the stage, the sides of the stage, and then the front of the stage, where the audience is. This last "wall", the fourth one, is just that: the actors must pretend that the audience is not there, and that that fourth wall really is there. To "break" that wall is to have the actors recognize the audience's existence. Either by direct or indirect means. Other works can do this as well. A cartoon saying that watching cartoons is a waste of time, is one example. Another is if a character in a story wonders how people reading the story think of her.

Here's a thread about it.

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#47 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

So in doing this "breaking" of the fourth wall does that me with the appeal of my story
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#48 Post by TinyVoices »

Depends. You can make some interesting jokes with it, or just fall on your face trying to be funny.

Honestly the first time I heard the term "fourth wall", was because of anime. Most of the times I've heard it since are for the same reason. So I don't have much experience with it myself. So, I can't really give you any pointers on how you should or shouldn't use it. Sorry.

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#50 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

sorry i know its still on it's way I've just been doing a lot of other things too. like for example Mila is the one who is continuing Humanoid High instead of me and she made me her personal editor and publisher so the story is still under me it's just now written by her. And i must say she's getting really good. Surprisingly her writing style is quite like mine. must be from all the coaching I did for her.
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#51 Post by Nina »

Buck do you miss talking to me yet on this site. But ofcourse we see each other every day.
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#52 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

WTF you really wrote THAT on my thread......so unbielievebly pointless..............
Oh well Hey anyway Chapter nine will be on its way in like.......next year at that the least. i dont know why but ive been putting it off ever since school started. so if you guys are annoyed with me because of the massive delay, blame My high school for giving me so much home work that it takes me five hours to to do it. yeah and by the time im done im too tired to write.

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#53 Post by Silly Zealot »

Take the time you need, it's not like we are going anywhere... yet.
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#54 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Silly Zealot wrote:Take the time you need, it's not like we are going anywhere... yet.
YET........thanks that makes me wonder.....
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#56 Post by anonfox123 »

Ack! Wall of text!!! It would be nice of you could break it into paragraphs. But why are they going by Kaiya's ex-master's house? I would have thought they would want to stay as far away as possible?
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#57 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

I cant tell you cause that would spoil it. Anyway her master is dead. So they don't gotta worry about him.
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#58 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

hey guys big news! I have opened a rollplaying thread for fans and new readers of my story The Hybrid.
Yeah now you guys can actually put your own characters and events in a whole new story line similar to The Hybrid but it's completely different. I know I probably shouldn't advertise the sign up thread. So I'm Gonna post it in my signature.
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#59 Post by Nina »

Oh thats cool but what I want to know is when your gonna get back to your story.
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#60 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

at some time
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