"The Hybrid" Twokinds fanfiction

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#31 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

ENOUGH! ive had it with you. Stop writing me love messages. I'm gonna feed you to an anaconda.
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#32 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Hey guys I'm really sorry but ill be gone for three weeks for a leadership training at a summer camp. So ill be writing the next chapter there and then ill transfer it to my computer and then post it here.
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#33 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Back and sorry I actually didn't get to writing it. So ill do that to night.
Forgot too.
Damn over 600 veiws. I'm impressed with how much you guys like this story.
oh HEY guys two new characters are coming soon. (Just thought id give a heads up).
one is Caster (human on the front cover)
The other will be a surprise ...... but someone on this site will be happy to have a character in my story.
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#34 Post by Nina »

hey buck have you ever considered doing side stories? and is the new character me? whats the characters name? Human? Keidrin? or Basitin?
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#36 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Ok almost finished with chap 8.
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#38 Post by Nina »

Really great chapter Buck. Can't wait for chap nine. And thanks for Moon.
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#39 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Your welcome.
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#40 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

Hey guys I'm gonna do short humorous stories just for side stuff.
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#42 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

You know I'm curious to know if my short was humorous in any way, shape, or form. Could someone tell me if I should continue with the shorts?
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#43 Post by Silly Zealot »

You could keep them up, but only if they have more goofy or witty (love witty comments) jokes, that would give more interest towards this thread and it's contents. :)
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#44 Post by anonfox123 »

To be honest, I do think you have something good in "breaking the 4th wall", but that little test piece you did seemed a little rushed. PM me if you want to see what I thought up after reading it.
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#45 Post by Maakisu Suzaki »

What fourth wall? Huh...... anyway Im not good with witty comments but I can make characters act differently in ways that they wouldn't act in the story that could be funny.
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