All valid points. Yes, I did make up the word “àm’ridge”. I have no clue what it means. I can up with it at midnight while I was sweating in my west-facing, non-air-conditioned upstairs bedroom. It was probably a hallucination, now that I think about it.Technic[Bot] wrote: ↑Thu Jul 23, 2020 3:53 amAnd regarding the fourth:
Amirite? Is that and invented word? If so how did you come up with it? Sorry I have a curious interest on synthetic languages and terms.
Also I think Nat worries seems a bit out of proportion. You know her plan but for what I gather Raine asked her to pretend to be a sex slave not to a to actually... Uhm... Do any real sex work right?
Thought I imagine Natani personal hell is being a sex-slave. On one hand he is forced to be and act female and on the other she has absolutely no agency about it.
Finally I think if I remember correctly Keidran are not fertile all year round so natani has no risk of conception.
As for your points about Natani: I get what you’re saying. While I can chalk that up to hyperbole for the story’s sake, I’d be lying. In the comic, both Natani and Zen (specifically Nat) are portrayed as prudish. In my opinion, Natani’s frightened of a) sex and b) people both knowing and using her female body. And you are correct: Natani can’t actually get preggers at this point in the story. If you read other stories (specifically NSFW ones) most writers don’t note that fact. It’s hilarious because I always laugh when people write like that, but it sets such a precedent that I went along with it.
I guess I’m just an idiot.