Wonder if this is okay to post...I tired to copy Toms style but it still came out in my own... Any positive critique is welcome.
Warning: Contains SHOUJO-AI (Girl x Girl relationships) If you are offended...Well...Don't read.
Summary: During their stay at Erics ship Trace continues to neglect Flora in an effort to extend her life. One day after a particularly loud argument Flora leaves saddened and a certain spotted Anthro takes notice.
Well first off you could have put these both on the same post- no reason to double post it.
Otherwise its not that bad. It's simplistic- it could definitely be improved in line quality and anatomy. (For example - Breast start just bellow where the arm connects to the shoulders. Pay attention to arm length and foreshortening.)
I suggest just continuing to draw and take these things into consideration - and when possible try working more on anatomy and details.
