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Second page redraw

Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2018 8:42 pm
by hatunemiku01
First things first, if I end up making more pages, I'll be putting them in a master list so as not to spam the drawing board.

Alrighty, I just finished up the second page. I didn't have as much time to spend on this, so I wasn't able to get Tom's style down as well. Also, my line work is a bit sloppier. I did get better at the backgrounds though (I think!)
Thanks for all the positive feedback I got on the last page! It's really encouraging me to keep going :flora:

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Re: Second page redraw

Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2018 11:15 pm
by Thallium
hatunemiku01 wrote:
Sat Jun 09, 2018 8:42 pm
First things first, if I end up making more pages, I'll be putting them in a master list so as not to spam the drawing board.
Definitely a good idea, the mods no likey spammy.

Another very nice page, the backgrounds are certainly very good, especially when you compare them to what Tom was doing in the early pages of the comic (the non-updated versions that is, before he re-did them all for the books). I notice you've got some nice contrasting colours going with blue for humans and red for Flora (intentional?). Also, were you intending to make Flora's attacker look like a pirate? Because you managed it pretty well if so.

I would try and work on the speech bubbles if possible, they look a little fuzzy round the edges in places and so is some of the text. Maybe a nice serif font could help out as well as they're easier on the eye to read. Overall a good piece, hoping to see more from you.

Re: Second page redraw

Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2018 8:16 pm
by beltramy
I really like it!