Rasva's art/miniature painting

[Rasva]

So i got my drawing tablet just over two weeks ago, and i have decided to share these and future drawings here. Enjoy!

First drawing i completed.


During those two weeks it evolved into this.


And just a random animal.


Constructive criticism is appreciated.

[Rasva]

And some WIP Gun boar pics.

[prototype99]

not so fond on the second drawing, it somehow feels out of place, but i like your first and third drawings!

[Vintage]

Not bad at all, but the only thing I can see right away is that the second and third images are cropped oddly.

[prototype99]

that too ^^^^
i wasn't sure if it was just my ds or not

[Rasva]

not so fond on the second drawing, it somehow feels out of place, but i like your first and third drawings!

Yeah, i wasn't sure about that blue fur color but i decided to just roll with it.

Not bad at all, but the only thing I can see right away is that the second and third images are cropped oddly.

They are not cropped, i just ran out of space.

[Rasva]

Finished my gun boar, pics are not the best quality but i think they are good enough.

[FuhrerVonZephyr]

not so fond on the second drawing, it somehow feels out of place, but i like your first and third drawings!

Yeah, i wasn't sure about that blue fur color but i decided to just roll with it.

Not bad at all, but the only thing I can see right away is that the second and third images are cropped oddly.

They are not cropped, i just ran out of space.

I dont think it's the fur color that makes it look out of place, I think what they meant was that the first and third look much more well constructed than the second one.

And assuming you're working digitally, you can always resize your drawing to get more room. Otherwise it's a good habit to get into to draw out a basic structure for your characters. That way you can get an immediate idea if it will fit on the page and if there are any obvious fundamental proportion issues that you can fix before you're already drawn an entire body with clothing and muscle definition.

[Rasva]

Sorry if i'm being stupid here, but if it's the armor and stuff it is kind of supposed to look like that, since i was trying to make it look Skaveny.

Reference pic

[FuhrerVonZephyr]

Sorry if i'm being stupid here, but if it's the armor and stuff it is kind of supposed to look like that, since i was trying to make it look Skaveny.

Reference pic

No, the armor looks fine. I was talking about the face.

[prototype99]

yeah, the problem is the face