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#1 Post by johny »

Well after hanging around here a while I've finally been convinced by persistent badgering (jk) to pick up my old artistic side. This is the first I've drawn in 5 years so go easy on me lol jk I want constructive criticism, I got alot of rust to clean of my drawing skills.

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#2 Post by johny »

Here is my new car Jacob62 made me. I think it is really cool.


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#3 Post by DariusL »

johny wrote:Well after hanging around here a while I've finally been convinced by persistent badgering (jk) to pick up my old artistic side. This is the first I've drawn in 5 years so go easy on me lol jk I want constructive criticism, I got alot of rust to clean of my drawing skills.

Artic Fox
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The linework is a tad messy, but the anatomy is great! :)

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#4 Post by Myperson54 »

I agree with Ticoun here. I'm no artist myself, but I know about art, and this is pretty good. I'd love to see this expanded into a full character!

I do have to say though, that he looks a bit more like a wolf to me than a fox, but that's really just my opinion. Also, the neck seems a bit too long to me, but I'm not really sure if that part behind his cheek is his head again, or his neck.

So it needs work, but it still looks good. Keep it up!
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#5 Post by johny »

Thank you guys and the tips help tremendously. I'm gonna start working on it more tonight maybe I'll have a finished product done soon. Also I was worried he was a little to wolf like. I'm trying to create my self image in twokinds.

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#6 Post by jacobc62 »

Drawing yourself, eh?

Do you think you could create another copy of the drawing, only with a NASCAR firesuit? After all, the keidran version of you IS racing in the anthro racing series league I'm running.
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jacobc62 wrote:Drawing yourself, eh?

Do you think you could create another copy of the drawing, only with a NASCAR firesuit? After all, the keidran version of you IS racing in the anthro racing series league I'm running.
Yes I totally will!

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#8 Post by johny »

Got a new one. what you all think, one step closer? When i'm fully satisfied ill color and make a fire suite version for you Jacob.

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#9 Post by LuckyMudman »

NOw, that is looking really good johny
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#10 Post by Myperson54 »

The first one was good, but this is great! I can't wait to see what you draw next!
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#11 Post by SGT.Happy »

really nice drawn Johny :)

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#12 Post by johny »

Thank you guys. So do I have the fox look down better now?

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#13 Post by EvilNinjadude »

It is better.

Going by impressions alone, I'd say in pencil it's hard to make a fox not look like a wolf (aside from the ears, which I can see you HAVE tried). The other thing you could change is the muzzle: Short and pointed (but pointed both from the side and from the top).
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#14 Post by jacobc62 »

What I usually do when drawing is this:
-Draw the head shapes for Humans, Tiger Keidran, and Fox Keidran the exact same (or at least similar).
-Draw Wolf heads slightly less tall then the heads of the forementioned races, and draw the muzzle.
-The differences between Foxes and Tigers would be the stripes on the face, and the fur pattern in general.

*EDIT* Let me clarify.....

What I mean is that whether I'm drawing myself, Mike, or Trace, the head shape starts out the exact same. If I'm drawing either me or Mike, the ears are drawn the same, as well as the nose and the eyes. However, I draw the fur patterns differently since me and Mike are different sub-species of Keidran.
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#15 Post by johny »

I did a concept drawing for Jacob. I tried going with a slightly more pointed muzzle this time. Thanks Ninja. Right now i'm just trying to hone in my old skills. If anyone wants me to draw somting tell me. I need to draw a lot to get better. Also i gota figure out how to do the digital versions and color lol.

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