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#106 Post by Fireball0236 »

Pardon the double post, but it has been a while.
Fireball0236 wrote:One question though, "(...) for what I considered to be right!", he no longer considers it right then?
Two other people seem to agree this probably is a mistake, so posting it here.
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#107 Post by FastChapter »

Unless he's fighting for an idea that he no longer has, I'd say "consider right" is the better option.

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#108 Post by Fireball0236 »

For today's page:
Shouldn't it be "What's that?" (first panel), needing a capital? (And shouldn't "Mongrel" (penultimate panel) be lower case?)
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#109 Post by Darius »

Don't know if anyone has caught this but the released 1rst edition 2kinds book has a one spelling error. I guess it would pass for comic 53 chapter 3 in the archives but it's a small panel not included in comic 53, but listed in the book. The part where Flora voluntarily binds her hands to appear as though she's not a free keidran because free keidran are not permitted access to that human town.

"Free keidran are not aloud in this city. It's the only way." Allowed I believe is the correct spelling.
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#110 Post by The Luigiian »

QuothTheRaven wrote:Don't know if anyone has caught this but the released 1rst edition 2kinds book has a one spelling error. I guess it would pass for comic 53 chapter 3 in the archives but it's a small panel not included in comic 53, but listed in the book. The part where Flora voluntarily binds her hands to appear as though she's not a free keidran because free keidran are not permitted access to that human town.

"Free keidran are not aloud in this city. It's the only way." Allowed I believe is the correct spelling.
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#111 Post by Fireball0236 »

Post any errors you found in the book in this topic please:
http://2kinds.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=9417

And it seems this one has already been pointed out ^^.
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#112 Post by FoobyKamikaze »

Fireball0236 wrote:For today's page:
Shouldn't it be "What's that?" (first panel), needing a capital? (And shouldn't "Mongrel" (penultimate panel) be lower case?)
Actually, when a sentence opens with an ellipsis (...), the first letter of the first word is commonly written in lowercase.
Additionally, "Mongrel" is being used to address Laura. As a proper noun in this case, it is correctly capitalized.

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#113 Post by Ster Zetanee »

wait, I just realise, isn't this a topic best suited for the Comic board?
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#114 Post by Fireball0236 »

True, but it's more of an announcement than a topic. Not sure if they can be moved as easily.
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#115 Post by FoobyKamikaze »

Announcements just seem to be super-sticky'd topics. If Nanaki can make an announcement that spans over all of the boards, I'm sure it's easy enough to just move it over to the comic board. :P

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#116 Post by Fireball0236 »

Isn't Mike missing the scar/line on his left cheek in today's comic?
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#117 Post by avwolf »

For the comic for Februrary 4th, 2009, in Kat's comment, "want's" should not have an apostrophe (it should just be "Eric wants you to..."). Also, I believe that "Guys" should have a lowercase "g" instead of a capital, though I'm not 100% confident that is the case.
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#118 Post by Wynni »

The intelligence general's line does not read well; I believe 'scholar' is misused in this context.

Alternate phrasings: 'men of scholarship', 'both scholarly men,' or even "men of learning" would work.
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Wynni wrote:The intelligence general's line does not read well; I believe 'scholar' is misused in this context.

Alternate phrasings: 'men of scholarship', 'both scholarly men,' or even "men of learning" would work.
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#120 Post by Wynni »

j004y wrote: erudite men literate men.
Fix'd. :grin:
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