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#1 Post by Tom »

Alright everyone, here's the deal. My spelling is horrible, and my grammer isn't always perfect either. So if you feel like helping Twokinds out, I would ask that anyone who feels like it just go through some of the comics and check for spelling and grammer mistakes. I will then in turn correct these mistakes, and you can all enjoy a well written comic, at least as far as dialogue goes ^^'

Something to keep in mind: Euchre speaks broken english. Spelling and grammer during these times are immune.

Other then that, people feel free to post your corrects here. Also, please add a link to the comic you are correcting, so I may find it. Thank you to all that feel like participating. ^^

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#2 Post by Luca Fox »

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031024.html
When Neutral says your it should be you're (as in 'you are'.)
Also, wimper is spelled whimper.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031027.html
Your here should also be spelled you're.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031029.html
wimper = whimper

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031103.html
In the third panel Trace says intellegent. It should be spelled intelligent.
In the fourth panel he should say responding.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031110.html
In the last panel intellegent should be spelled intelligent.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031112.html
In the last panel Flora says wont. It should be won't.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031119.html
In the second panel their should be spelled they're.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031201.html
Quite should be quiet in the second panel.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031203.html
I'm not sure if you meant Trace to say 'gunna' but if you didn't it should be gonna.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20031224.html
wimper = whimper
The Red-haired guy says ment in the second panel. It should be spelled meant.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040109.html
Third panel: suplies should be supplies.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040114.html
I don't know if it matters greatly but most people would have the 'essence of pure evil.'

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040126.html
In the last panel: imposible should be impossible

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040202.html
You don't have to capitalize 'it'd.'

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040213.html
In the last panel:I think waaa should be whaaa.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040220.html
In the fifth panel you don't have to capitalize 'looking' and sence should be sense.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040223.html
In the fifth panel: unwriten should be unwritten.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040227.html
Some in the second panel should be so.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040227.html
In the thirteenth panel: trace should be capitalized.
In the last panel: wimper = whimper

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040303.html
In the last panel: if should be capitalized.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040305.html
In the fifth panel: Your should be You're.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040315.html
In the second panel: neet should be neat.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040317.html
In the third panel you don't have to put a comma between Flora and 'and.'
In the fifth panel: wa-what should be wha-what.

I'd search for more but I've gotta get ready for school soon.

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#3 Post by Shammeh »

I'm an aspiring writer but my spelling is atrosious. That's what editers are for^_^
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#4 Post by Maloo-MF9 »

Same here. Spelling is a annoyance when you're focused on writing a story.


Oh yes, speaking of writing, post any form of writing you want on the story board...... (cept for teh pr0n) It's rather bare.
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#5 Post by Shammeh »

I might, if I can find my old stuff. Most of the stuff I write on the comp is for rps, I might post some o' that up.
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#6 Post by Raikishin »

I don't know where (Damn my slow dial-up connection), but somewhere, you wrote willn't (Will not). It's actually won't.

Hope I helped!

-Raikishin

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#7 Post by Luca Fox »

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040412.html
First Panel: piece should be peace.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040426.html
First Panel: Flora says "I've been meaning to apologies." It should be 'apologize'.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040526.html
First Panel: I'm not too sure about whether or not the spelling on destracted should stay that way since Euchre is saying it, but it should be distracted.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040531.html
Third Panel: Keidran was spelled Kiedran.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040712.html
First Panel: 'yes' should be capitalized.
Third Panel: Your should be changed to You're.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040802.html
Third Panel: thru should be through.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040806.html
Last Panel: yourelf should be yourself.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040813.html
Last Panel: sence should be sense.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040816.html
Sixth Panel: them should be changed to then.
wont should be won't.
quite should be quiet.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040915.html
Sixth Panel: trace should be capitalized.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041001.html
Third Panel: yesturday should be yesterday.
The phrase 'commit in someone' could be changed to 'commit to someone.'

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#8 Post by Ari3s »

wow fox....you are a beast...2 posts and its basically the whole comic. Keep up the great work (says sincerely)
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#9 Post by Luca Fox »

What can I say? I love this comic.

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#10 Post by Luca Fox »

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041008.html
Fifth panel: hah should be capitalized.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041018.html
meanwhile should be capitalized
Last panel: pouce should be pounce.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041027.html
Second panel: occationally should be occasionally.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041108.html
Third panel: occures should be occurs.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041110.html
First panel: she should be capitalized.
Fifth panel: Flora says "I pounce you all the time" but should be "I pounce on you all the time."

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041112.html
Last panel: fullful should be fulfill.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041115.html
Fifth panel: I can't tell if 'til is spelled 'tIl (with a capital i).

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041126.html
First panel: aught should be ought.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041201.html
First panel: sorry should be capitalized.
Fourth panel: Keidran is spelled Kiedran.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041215.html
Eighth panel: interupting should be interrupting.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20041220.html
First panel: Trace says "you claws." It should be "your claws."

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20050105.html
Fifth panel: your should be you're.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20050107.html
First panel: aww should be capitalized.

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20050112.html
Second panel: effected should be affected

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/comics/20050213.jpg
First panel: once should be capitalized.

Finally! I've caught up to the most recent strip!

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#11 Post by MeaCulpa, S.C.M. »

http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040707.html
http://twokinds.keenspace.com/d/20040709.html
I'm pretty sure what Euchre is saying should be in those parentheses thingies (don't know what they're called), considering how fluently he's speaking.
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#12 Post by Blaze MoonShadow »

these things < >? I think they are called brackets, and so are these [ ], but whatever, you mean liek the things that they use like as people are speaking abohter langauge and the stuff int he < > is the translation so we understand kinda thing? Because we know Euchre speaks english, he talks to Trace, and Tace so doesn't speak a keidren language or anything, does he?
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#13 Post by MeaCulpa, S.C.M. »

Blaze MoonShadow wrote:these things < >? I think they are called brackets, and so are these [ ], but whatever, you mean liek the things that they use like as people are speaking abohter langauge and the stuff int he < > is the translation so we understand kinda thing? Because we know Euchre speaks english, he talks to Trace, and Tace so doesn't speak a keidren language or anything, does he?
I don't mean to be rude, but could you please spell-check that? I can't understand a word you just said.
Thanks!
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#14 Post by Blaze MoonShadow »

(\/)ea (ulpa wrote:
Blaze MoonShadow wrote:these things < >? I think they are called brackets, and so are these [ ], but whatever, you mean liek the things that they use like as people are speaking abohter langauge and the stuff int he < > is the translation so we understand kinda thing? Because we know Euchre speaks english, he talks to Trace, and Tace so doesn't speak a keidren language or anything, does he?
I don't mean to be rude, but could you please spell-check that? I can't understand a word you just said.
Thanks!
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<.< it wasn't that bad, there were like 6 typos, and it was still highly understandable.

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"These things < >? I think they are called brackets, and so are these [ ], but that doesn't matter. So you mean like the things that they use like when people are speaking another language and the text in the < > is the translation so we understand what they are saying? Because we know Euchre speaks English, he talks to Trace and Trace doesn't speak a keidren language or anything, does he?"
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#15 Post by Ashpool »

< > I believe those are called "angle brackets", and these [ ] are just brackets.
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