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Britt · #31 Post by **Britt** » Wed Jul 19, 2006 9:14 pm

Today's Comic:

Tom Spelled Gauking, it is spelled Gawking.

There ya go Tom, I helped for once! PRAISE ME! PRAISE ME!

Just kidding, Glad I could help!

FinetalPies · #32 Post by **FinetalPies** » Wed Aug 02, 2006 3:18 pm

Sweet, I was wondering if there would be a way to tell you grammar errors other than email, cause I saw one when I was going through the first time round.

Crap, now I have to go read the whole comic again (=D)

Although before gladly going through the whole series again, what kind of errors should I point out? Like is saying wimper should be whimper, would Tom even bother fixing something so small? Or intellegent to intelligent, or conjunctions like someones to someone's?

And if I point out a lot of small errors, I fear looking like a picky critic kinda guy instead of a loves this comic, loves helping people, and knows he's naturally pretty good with english kinda guy =\

Ashpool · #33 Post by **Ashpool** » Thu Aug 03, 2006 4:59 am

Go ahead, I think the whole purpose of this thread is small errors. No one will hate you for helping in a regulated and structured way such as this. :P

Village Fool · #34 Post by **Village Fool** » Thu Aug 03, 2006 7:28 am

july 31st comic. keith said "This is much better [then] the forest"
change then into than

IT'S A LION! · #35 Post by **IT'S A LION!** » Tue Aug 15, 2006 9:43 pm

In this comic, Natani says "she'll think I'm a female," but shouldn't she be saying "she'll know I'm a female"? Especially after Sage's thread...

Zeuxis · #36 Post by **Zeuxis** » Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:10 pm

IT'S A LION! wrote:In this comic, Natani says "she'll think I'm a female," but shouldn't she be saying "she'll know I'm a female"? Especially after Sage's thread...

Natani might be confused about (her)(him) self. Maybe he was cursed into a she? We don't know that story yet.

And it wouldn't matter if she thought or knew, it is the same thing. Even if she meant it in that way, thinking is the same as knowing if you don't know that you're only thinking!

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Munch · #37 Post by **Munch** » Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:19 pm

oh dude >.> no offense but there are alot, but then im in the same boat i cant spell for crap and actually its mostly gramatical errors not spelling.

Black_Elite1 · #38 Post by **Black_Elite1** » Mon Sep 18, 2006 10:53 pm

Anyone post this?
http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20040423.html
first panel,

"this the our room"
should be
"this is our room"?

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20040430.html

"necklase"
should be
"necklace"

Cloud Strife · #39 Post by **Cloud Strife** » Tue Oct 17, 2006 3:34 am

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20061002.html

Last panel. Should be 'affects everyone' instead of 'effects everyone'.

Elu Longin · #40 Post by **Elu Longin** » Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:23 pm

I noticed a minor spelling mistake in the current comic. In the fifth panel, Keith says: "Erg no, I can't think that way! I gotta get ouf of here."

As I said, it's just a minor spelling mistake

Koi · #41 Post by **Koi** » Mon Jan 08, 2007 5:50 pm

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20050606.html

In the first panel, it says "breif moment in time."

Should be "brief."

Tath · #42 Post by **Tath** » Fri Jan 12, 2007 9:43 pm

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20070110.html

in the 4th panel, it's usually spelled gonna, not gunna.

Zero-striker · #43 Post by **Zero-striker** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 8:11 am

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031103.html
Panel3: Intellegent should be Intelligent

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031105.html
Panel5: alittle should be a little

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031107.html
Panel2: Tommorow should be Tomorrow

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031112.html
Panel 2: "What? Why not. It seems perfectly reasonable." should be..."What? Why not, it seems perfectly reasonable." Or.. "What? Why not? It seems perfectly reasonable" (You're choice.)

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031117.html
Panel5: "hm?" should be "Hm?"

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031121.html
Panel2..3..?: "Huh? smoke?" should be "Huh? Smoke?

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031201.html
Panel2: "quite" should be "quiet"

Oh man im done for now, i'm going to bed 3:10 in the A.M. here, goodnight, i'll continue some other time.

Vulpix · #44 Post by **Vulpix** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 12:57 pm

http://2kinds.com/images/20070215.jpg

You're scent => Your scent

You've been an assassin a long time, haven't you? => You've been an assassin for a long time, haven't you?

If you want, I can go back and revise every single comic you've posted. I have them all....

P.S.: 2kinds is an amazing stuff, Tom (may I call you that way?) Way to go.

Yours sincerely,
Vulpix

Durandal · #45 Post by **Durandal** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 10:11 pm

Vulpix wrote:You've been an assassin for a long time, haven't you?

I would disagree with this correction because it is dialogue. There is no right or wrong, it is just what a person might realistically say in that situation, whether it is grammatically correct, or not.

Notably unstable,
Durandal