Twokinds needs your help!
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Today's comic (6 Apr 2009), 5th Panel, bottom most text bubble, "conseption" should be "conception".
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I noticed while browsing the Links on the main page, the first comic listed is "Caribbean Blue," but the emboldened title is misspelled as "Caribean Blue."
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Thanks.
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In the comic for April 20th, 2009, third panel, Alaric's line "I'm standing on the section of the bridge I damanged...!" (Emphasis mine.) Obviously, that should be "damaged."
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Today's comic - panel 6 - "Healing wounds like is beyond me."
Should there be a "his" between "like" and "is"?
Should there be a "his" between "like" and "is"?
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Tom changed it to "Healing wounds like this is beyond me."Tuna wrote:Today's comic - panel 6 - "Healing wounds like is beyond me."
Should there be a "his" between "like" and "is"?
Though it should be either:
1. "Healing wounds like these is beyond me."
2. "Healing a wound like this is beyond me."
Depends on wether she is speaking of all the wounds or a particularly severe one. I'm guessing it's the first.
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I think what Tom means is "Healing wounds similar to this particular wound is beyond me." It's a little akward but still correct.Sithil wrote:Tom changed it to "Healing wounds like this is beyond me."Tuna wrote:Today's comic - panel 6 - "Healing wounds like is beyond me."
Should there be a "his" between "like" and "is"?
Though it should be either:
1. "Healing wounds like these is beyond me."
2. "Healing a wound like this is beyond me."
Depends on wether she is speaking of all the wounds or a particularly severe one. I'm guessing it's the first.
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But she doesn't seem to be pointing out any particular wound. It just strikes me wrong. However, if it is as you suggest, Aze, then it is indeed correct.
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I think the only major wound Keith has is the one across his chest. I think he can live with a sliced ear and a cut over the eye.Sithil wrote:But she doesn't seem to be pointing out any particular wound. It just strikes me wrong. However, if it is as you suggest, Aze, then it is indeed correct.
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If you whant help on anything,you can count on me,i was always the top with mine english lectionc on my school and have some interesting ideas for the comic.
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On the comic for January 6th, 2010, as pointed out by Escobar:
He's correct. The ancient wolf's comment should be "Just make sure they're all silenced..." rather than "makes."Escobar wrote:Feels like an error to me but should there be an 's' on 'make' when Wolfy says " Just makes sure they're all silenced..."?
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*head-smack* I had completely forgotten about this thread. Thanks for fixing that.avwolf wrote:On the comic for January 6th, 2010, as pointed out by Escobar:He's correct. The ancient wolf's comment should be "Just make sure they're all silenced..." rather than "makes."Escobar wrote:Feels like an error to me but should there be an 's' on 'make' when Wolfy says " Just makes sure they're all silenced..."?
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I'm a pretty good writer, so I'll be glad to help Tom with any of the spelling and grammar whenever I can.
Shouldn't that be "Healing wounds like these are beyond me."?Sithil wrote:Tuna wrote: 1. "Healing wounds like these is beyond me."