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#76 Post by Kinuki »

Today's Comic (April 08, 2008), First Panel.

"How do I keep getting to situations like this?"

should be

"How do I keep getting into situations like this?"
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#77 Post by Lupin »

Photoshop has a spell check feature. However that's only so useful. Like with ^ that issue She said "to" instead of "into." There's no tool that can be fool proof other than having people correct you.

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#78 Post by avwolf »

In the fourth panel for the comic for 04/14/2008, Keith states, "[T]here's not a lot of things that effect Basitins, but being wet and cold is one of them." "Effect" should be "affect." This makes the line, "[T]here's not a lot of things that affect Basitins, but being wet and cold is one of them."

In Natani's final line, she says, "I wont look if you don't, alright?" "Wont" should be "won't." The contraction is missing its apostrophe. This makes the line, "I won't look if you don't, alright?"

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#79 Post by Zovesta »

Can't believe people missed this...
Keith wrote: I don't know, I can't get through to him. maybe you should try.
The M should be capitalized. Comic: http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20051017.html

If that was a comma, weird lookin' one, huh? If so, sorry.
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#80 Post by avwolf »

For the May 21st comic, in the first panel, Keith's dialogue reads, "Hm, you you say your brother." Either there should be an ellipsis between the two "you"s or one of them should be excised, possibly replacing the first "you" with "did."

Fourth panel, Natani's dialogue starts with "Oh, don't worry. he's fine..." The 'h' on "he's" should be capitalized (or the period after "worry" should be changed to a comma).

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#81 Post by kryss »

Ah! avwolf just told me about this thread.

In the 6/4/2008 comic, 'rended' should probably be 'rent'. As in, "Her mind was rent asunder."
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#82 Post by Fatalcrash »

Comic 20/06/2008 - Natani's line in last panel. "He took one look at us and kill himself right on the spot!"

'Kill' should be changed to 'killed'.
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#83 Post by Sithil »

Fatalcrash wrote:Comic 20/06/2008 - Natani's line in last panel. "He took one look at us and kill himself right on the spot!"

'Kill' should be changed to 'killed'.
I think we can blame that on the fact that she is obviously drunk when saying that.
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#84 Post by Flaar »

Heres one i just noticed:
http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20040915.html
In the 5th panel the man says "It's just isn't normal, you know?"
and it should either be <It just isn't normal> or <It's just not normal>.

(if you broke it down from contractions it would become It is just is not normal which is too many is's)
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#85 Post by epion04 »

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20080404.html
Trace says "{I declare this keidran my mate. Now according your own laws...}"

between the "according" and the "your" there should be a "to"
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#86 Post by FoobyKamikaze »

I still think someone should make a full chronological archive of the typos.

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#87 Post by Kakurady »

Photoshop can spell check? Whoa.

Anyway I've found a problem, it's in a reinked and recolored page.

Second panel of Twokinds Page 19:
Flora: But he's... a bit of a coward. We were in a caravan when it was attacked.
Flora: He should have helped, but he ran away instead.
Who's attacking here? And who's being attacked?
Should be “I was attacked”, “he was attacked”, “we were attacked” or “he atta” — er, the last one doesn't really make much sense.

The original comic of 20031208 has this panel as:
Flora: But he's a coward. He should have helped me when I was attacked by that other human.
Flora: But he ran away instead.
Hmm... Ephemural isn't on the cast page either...
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#88 Post by Demus »

"It" as in the caravan. Caravan was attacked, caravan is it. Attacker doesn't really matter. Makes more sense that way anyway, because why would he have ran away when it's just about a puny human with a sword? Even Flora could have beat him, given the right conditions.

Eh, prove me wrong, but Ephemural is in the cast page, although under the name "Master Mage" of the five Templars chosen by evil Trace. Ephemural was just undercover for own gain, and even though is a mask, never gave up the cover. So I guess Ephemural is still counted as the Master Mage by cast page? Notice how much effort I put into avoiding Ephemurals gender? : P I had the picture that it's a she, but can a mask really have a gender?

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#89 Post by avwolf »

Comic for August 28, 2008

Second panel, there's a mispelling: it should be "Eavesdropping."

Alabaster's dialogue in the fifth panel's a little awkward too. You might want to move "personally" around in the sentence... Something like "...I've spoken with the king personally and had your trial moved up to tonight," or "...I've spoken with the king and personally had your moved up to tonight," might flow a little better.
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#90 Post by Durham the Kitsune »

August 31, In the second panel, i believe that Mike is supposed to say, "all you asked for was...."
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