Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

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Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#1 Post by Catherine_Puce » Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:22 pm

I got the book today and noticed something. Nobody made a topic about the five pages added in the book or about the changes in the comic. Tom cuts the dream sequence of Keith. It's sad but some sacrifices must be made, maybe he thinks that he has a better place for it later or he simply decided to remove it of the story.

For the five page prologue, I find really interesting the fact that he cover his chest by instinct when he detects Flora. It's nice to see that Keith can give good advices and reassuring sentences even if he don't like Flora and Euchre presence. I can already predict a little change in the pages of the next book. I must admit that this doesn't give him a lot of luck. Flora is a thief and a trickster. Don't change Flora, Keith is fun to watch when naked.

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Re: Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#2 Post by Painseeker » Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:21 pm

Yeah the book was great XD
I loved the added ending, it was a perfect way to finish off a book
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Re: Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#3 Post by C_Death » Thu Jan 22, 2009 2:56 am

Catherine_Puce wrote:Tom cuts the dream sequence of Keith. It's sad but some sacrifices must be made, maybe he thinks that he has a better place for it later or he simply decided to remove it of the story.
You can't know that for sure, this is only book 1. What if he moved it to later in the story? It would then show up in a later book.
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Re: Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#4 Post by Fireball0236 » Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:52 am

As C_Death says, it may have been moved to later in the book/story. Though, as stated in the Corrections topic of mine, a few parts have been cut out.

The bath scene was funny, but I thought Tom would add bonus material like incentive style, rather than actual extra story pages.

Flora, a thief and a trickster, I must have forgotten or been missing something important then? Even if I think about the whole story,and not where the book ends... But that and Keiths change seems more for the Comic Discussion board, than for the book?
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Re: Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#5 Post by Catherine_Puce » Thu Jan 22, 2009 11:27 pm

Fireball0236 wrote:The bath scene was funny, but I thought Tom would add bonus material like incentive style, rather than actual extra story pages.

Flora, a thief and a trickster, I must have forgotten or been missing something important then? Even if I think about the whole story,and not where the book ends... But that and Keiths change seems more for the Comic Discussion board, than for the book?
Personnatly, I preper the prologue as material bonus. This allow to give a little deepening of the character's relations. Tom didn't expect to keep Keith for more that fulfill his purpose in the story. He gains importance with time, this bonus comics are a great moment to flesh out his earliest moments.

For the thief and trickster Flora, maybe I make a mistake while translating my thoughts. She stole Keith clothe as a punisment. She grabs Trace love from her ex-wife and Maren, twice if you count the time she kidnaps him when he is about to get some quality time. She steal Trace's pants and a kiss from him as soon she got a good chance. Taking stuffs that aren't her seem like a second nature. And For the trickster thing I admit that there are fewer example but I'm sure that the joke about flesh eater tiger count. She also tends to manipulate Trace at every occasion she has by making sad face then forcing him to take her side or get forgiven without problem.

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Re: Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#6 Post by Cellidor » Fri Jan 23, 2009 3:15 am

Speaking of page cuts, I noticed that this page http://twokindscomic.com/?p=25
wasn't in the book.
I assume this was because it didn't take up a whole page of space? :grin:
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#7 Post by ConkerBirdy » Fri Jan 23, 2009 11:25 am

Ending was unexpected XD bloody funny, love Keith's face on 2nd last panel XD reminded me i think of Hank off King of the Hill. :P

Read it all within a few hrs, took breaks here and there. The long wait was totally worth it! :D
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Re: Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#8 Post by ConkerBirdy » Fri Jan 23, 2009 7:12 pm

Cellidor wrote:Speaking of page cuts, I noticed that this page http://twokindscomic.com/?p=25
wasn't in the book.
I assume this was because it didn't take up a whole page of space? :grin:
im so sure that was a whole page... why the hell has it been cut in half?
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#9 Post by Fireball0236 » Fri Jan 23, 2009 7:57 pm

No, that page has always been only a little part.

Btw, do use the edit button...
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Re: Book One topic "Don't read if you don't have the book yet"

#10 Post by ConkerBirdy » Sun Jan 25, 2009 11:22 pm

Fireball0236 wrote:No, that page has always been only a little part.

Btw, do use the edit button...
heh, i as going to, but i didnt think it would fit suit it >_> dont ask...
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