Comic for September 14, 2017: Clovis

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Comic for September 14, 2017: Clovis

#1 Post by NiWo21k »

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I absolut love the middle frame - not only from the standpoint of Natani and Zen telling where they know of Clovis but also the colours and the way the characters are placed :)

And also that they didnt hear of him and thought he was "dead" is interesting. Lets see where this is going

Edit: Also that Twitter text of Tom is great :grin: "A new enemy on the horizon from Zen and Natani's past! Half fox, half wolf, all smug."
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Beautiful page! I like the fact that Zen makes some mistakes while talking in human and uses Keidran when he comes to a word he can't say in human. Nice! :D

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They might not have their telepathy working at the moment, but Nat and Zen's minds still are truly in sync.

Carver's looking a little smug in that second panel. Hopefully that'll be fixed within the coming pages, preferably with a good dose of revenge.
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#4 Post by IHeartMaeve »

I don't really have much to say to what we have here, except maybe this: *Gulp* "Ouch time."

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#5 Post by Foxx Trotter »

I see hazardous conditions ahead. Clovis is dropping by...
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NiWo21k wrote: Thu Sep 14, 2017 7:12 pmI absolut love the middle frame - not only from the standpoint of Natani and Zen telling where they know of Clovis but also the colours and the way the characters are placed :)
Cyon wrote: Thu Sep 14, 2017 7:21 pmThey might not have their telepathy working at the moment, but Nat and Zen's minds still are truly in sync.
In addition to the bloody coins, I too like this page for those reasons.

P.S. I was away 'sort of' working on something else. Did this get updated before I got here? If so, did anyone archive the original?
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#7 Post by Dadrobit »

Well, I got the "Natani must be involved in the discovery of Clovis for the sake of exposition" prediction right a few weeks past, but that's roughly about as impressive as predicting what I'm having for dinner later.

Mexican probably...

Anyways, love this page! It's been too long since we've seen both the assassins in one page, (the bloody coins are a nice touch too). It's also great to get some Clovis info for the folks who haven't had the chance to get into TDM. All around I'm very happy with this update! :mrgrin:
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Conflict is coming. And this time it's gonna be serious.

Now I wonder who will make the first move. Clovis or our heroes?
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#9 Post by AndreRhineDavis »

So did Natani just tell group A about the dark magic attack on them, and their subsequent mind/soul-link with Zen? What did they reveal and what did they not reveal? That part was kind of skipped over.
Also, I wonder whether Reni is telepathically broadcasting what Natani is saying to everyone else, so that Trace can understand them too. Kind of like the TARDIS translating for you xD

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You know I rarely do appreciate Zen- especially with how much I like Natani. But seeing these two act in sync right now makes me like him a bit more. Shows that these two are actually brothers.

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#12 Post by Shockwave07 »

The layout of this page really works well. And seeing this I wan to see what happened in the other story... This is a tease!

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Him wrote: Fri Sep 15, 2017 2:33 pm You know I rarely do appreciate Zen- especially with how much I like Natani. But seeing these two act in sync right now makes me like him a bit more. Shows that these two are actually brothers.
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It looks like Zen's a lot more concerned in the finals panels than Natani is. Says a lot about them.

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Kyrit wrote: Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:06 am It looks like Zen's a lot more concerned in the finals panels than Natani is. Says a lot about them.
Excepting the shackle incident, Zen has tended to be the more cautious one in the family for a while now. Natani has always been the "leap before you look" side of the duo.

Granted, his caution hasn't prevented Zen from getting snuck up on and stabbed/bludgenoned/tackled and generally foiled in his endeavors, but think of how much worse it would be for him if he wasn't cautious?
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