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That moment Raine realises Rose is Wonder Wolfen!

Natani showing off the fact she's learned some words. Bless. Answer her, Human!

Fa da da da da dahhhh; Squirrel power!!

Hmmm, Natani speaks English with a Cockney dialect?

Something a bit subtler that I like; Natani casually saying "I need your help with something." Just another aspect of how comfortable they are together. Rose: "Master Trace, I believe we need to talk about the billing for some of your... Guests from last night." Trace: "Bil...

That's a Scurry-class realism Squirrel!

I love a good apology.

Which this wasn't.

But I love it anyhow.

An Anonfox win is a worthy win!

I must admit, as a relatively recent reader, I like these strips that directly reference older strips because then I come here and people explain the strips for me! It helps. And has anyone noticed another fantasy webcomic has arrived on the web? From the Corspeckens, creators of Faux Pas, comes Sha...

I like the awkwardness between Alice and Reni in the first panel. Alice covers her nerves with military formalness and Reni doesn't have a clue how to respond. Good guessing there, Reni.

Jarlath wrote: Glad to hear that you're still on top of it! Damn that Real Life... Always getting in the way of what is fun and time wasting...

This is a true statement.

stealthyblue wrote:Maybe this has already been discussed but what's with the floating rocks?

Small, hot, rocks can float as easily as a Squirrel can.

On a different note.

Mrs Nibbly. On her back & spitting water. WIN!

This is reading well. Decent character, a decent misdirection with regards to his meeting (put in to show he's not Batman?) and it flows well. What you need to do now, though, is 'tie it off'. Use a line like 'Your new life begins' at the end because you're in danger of moving out of the 'short' sto...

For me it reads well. It gets you into the story fairly quickly and easily. I have a few minor quibbles though. For the description of the character (millionaire, martial artist, driven by demons and by something that happened in his childhood) you may as well have said 'Batman'. Batty's flaw is tha...