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by Jarlath
Mon Dec 05, 2016 8:29 pm
Forum: Ranting Board
Topic: Rant/Vent/sad thread
Replies: 21964
Views: 854835

Re: Rant/Vent/sad thread

I looked in the mirror earlier today to comb my hair, when I noticed a disturbingly off color patch in my beard. I thought, "Oh, I ate a doughnut, I got some of the glaze in my beard." So I went to wash it off, so then I thought, "Oh, it's just the light playing tricks on me." S...
by Jarlath
Mon Dec 05, 2016 1:54 pm
Forum: Ranting Board
Topic: What made you smile today? Round 2!
Replies: 33893
Views: 1256506

Re: What made you smile today? Round 2!

Lets see... Finished Titanfall2 yesterday on Campaign mode. Fun game. Received the two new 22" monitors for the new computer system that is coming. Scored a Wacom Cintiq Companion (512gb version) and awaiting it's arrival. Oh and the first true snowfall happed last night. It's a good Start to D...
by Jarlath
Mon Dec 05, 2016 1:29 pm
Forum: Tech Board
Topic: Graphic tablets monitors inquiry
Replies: 17
Views: 7152

Re: Graphic tablets monitors inquiry

So I lucked out and was able to snag a used Cintiq Companion (512gb SSD version) for my son(s). Just awaiting its arrival so it can be wrapped up for X-Mas...
Manga Studio as well. Much happiness.
by Jarlath
Fri Dec 02, 2016 10:38 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Yo mama jokes
Replies: 7
Views: 4658

Re: Yo mama jokes

Your momma is so ugly... Chuck Norris is afraid of her....
by Jarlath
Thu Dec 01, 2016 1:24 am
Forum: Story Board
Topic: [FWC 16] Friend
Replies: 2
Views: 782

Re: [FWC 16] Friend

As soon as the ultimatum was proposed I knew that was the moment had given up, Missing a word? moment he had given up? A powerful story BTW. Unfortunately survivor's guilt exists... Nicely done in the consistent tone and a full story without dialog. Just my personal opinion, take it for what it is ...
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 6:28 pm
Forum: Story Board
Topic: Fall Writing Competition 2016
Replies: 63
Views: 21887

Re: Fall Writing Competition 2016

ConkerBirdy wrote:Damn, cant believe I found out about this the day it was ending. I wouldve given it my all for once and actually experimented with a short story idea I had.
So do it anyways and give it 110%. :)
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 6:26 pm
Forum: Ranting Board
Topic: What made you smile today? Round 2!
Replies: 33893
Views: 1256506

Re: What made you smile today? Round 2!

Mmmm Toxic Hell.... I love eating at Toxic Hell...

Ya Crunchwrap is awesome. I also like the spicy chicken soft tacos...
With oodles of Hot or Fire sauce.
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:50 pm
Forum: Tech Board
Topic: Graphic tablets monitors inquiry
Replies: 17
Views: 7152

Re: Graphic tablets monitors inquiry

If you were worried about price and space, I might want to suggest this 22" model MP 22-inch 1080p Battery-Free Pen Display Tablet Monoprice usually has some good quality items, and I've had my eye on this for awhile, it's smaller than the 24HD and might fit on the desk better. 20.9" x 12...
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 5:27 pm
Forum: Story Board
Topic: [FWC 16] Ascension
Replies: 4
Views: 1007

Re: [FWC 16] Ascension

Hmm... Corona nodded and stood up to collect her coat. Riley understood her more than most colleagues; they weren’t what most would call “close friends”, but nonetheless, they understood each other as if they’d grown up in the same town. (Nothing could have been further from the truth; Corona’s fami...
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 3:43 pm
Forum: Story Board
Topic: [FWC 16] Change
Replies: 2
Views: 829

Re: [FWC 16] Change

I do like the story concept of tradition being eroded away by advancement. Especially since I hunt. Which I would argue about the hunter being gone, I do agree about the loss of values and change. Well done. Only one thing I see cloths clothes (cloths reference fabric, clothes reference garments) Ju...
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 3:35 pm
Forum: Story Board
Topic: [FWC 16] Fighter
Replies: 2
Views: 763

Re: [FWC 16] Fighter

Welsh halfwit wrote:Any thought on this one?
Nope, I enjoyed the lost cause fighter story.

Only one thing that I suggest.
Probably his mother. Same as me.
Probably about his mother. Same as me.

Just my personal opinion, take it for what it is worth.
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 3:28 pm
Forum: Story Board
Topic: [FWC 16] THE RETURN OF HARVEST MOON
Replies: 2
Views: 717

Re: [FWC 16] THE RETURN OF HARVEST MOON

unless done intentionally with the character's thought's For them that don't know 'those who' instead of 'them that' livlihood livelihood keep wording consistent wi-fi vs. Wi-fi Some sentences are a tad long and could be broken up. Otherwise fun concept! Just my personal opinion, take it for what it...
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 3:16 pm
Forum: Story Board
Topic: [FWC 16] 2020
Replies: 1
Views: 652

Re: [FWC 16] 2020

Very nice concept and premise for a storyline. I am assuming that it was a dream sequence after he fell asleep on the bed. I would add one single line near the end as the dream sequences was realized. maybe after "it was only a prank..." Suggestion: it was only a prank... Glancing at the I...
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 3:08 pm
Forum: Story Board
Topic: [FWC 16] Ascension
Replies: 4
Views: 1007

Re: [FWC 16] Ascension

Wow.. 12,500+ words... Little bit longer than a short story... Couple spots are kind of off... Use of bracketed sentences to denote background info/internal feelings, when you otherwise use italics for personal thoughts. Corona only vaguely recognized him, but based on his name he could only be Greg...
by Jarlath
Wed Nov 30, 2016 3:28 am
Forum: Tech Board
Topic: Graphic tablets monitors inquiry
Replies: 17
Views: 7152

Re: Graphic tablets monitors inquiry

That's an expensive toy for an 11 years old :P It should be perfectly fine for playing TF2 if he isn't used to a high end gaming monitor (as I said: It's not different to a normal monitor). The only thing would be color management (as the 24" cintiq is AdobeRGB iirc you will have waaay too sat...