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I looked in the mirror earlier today to comb my hair, when I noticed a disturbingly off color patch in my beard. I thought, "Oh, I ate a doughnut, I got some of the glaze in my beard." So I went to wash it off, so then I thought, "Oh, it's just the light playing tricks on me." S...

Lets see... Finished Titanfall2 yesterday on Campaign mode. Fun game. Received the two new 22" monitors for the new computer system that is coming. Scored a Wacom Cintiq Companion (512gb version) and awaiting it's arrival. Oh and the first true snowfall happed last night. It's a good Start to D...

So I lucked out and was able to snag a used Cintiq Companion (512gb SSD version) for my son(s). Just awaiting its arrival so it can be wrapped up for X-Mas...
Manga Studio as well. Much happiness.

Your momma is so ugly... Chuck Norris is afraid of her....

As soon as the ultimatum was proposed I knew that was the moment had given up, Missing a word? moment he had given up? A powerful story BTW. Unfortunately survivor's guilt exists... Nicely done in the consistent tone and a full story without dialog. Just my personal opinion, take it for what it is ...

ConkerBirdy wrote:Damn, cant believe I found out about this the day it was ending. I wouldve given it my all for once and actually experimented with a short story idea I had.

So do it anyways and give it 110%.

Mmmm Toxic Hell.... I love eating at Toxic Hell...

Ya Crunchwrap is awesome. I also like the spicy chicken soft tacos...
With oodles of Hot or Fire sauce.

If you were worried about price and space, I might want to suggest this 22" model MP 22-inch 1080p Battery-Free Pen Display Tablet Monoprice usually has some good quality items, and I've had my eye on this for awhile, it's smaller than the 24HD and might fit on the desk better. 20.9" x 12...

Hmm... Corona nodded and stood up to collect her coat. Riley understood her more than most colleagues; they weren’t what most would call “close friends”, but nonetheless, they understood each other as if they’d grown up in the same town. (Nothing could have been further from the truth; Corona’s fami...

I do like the story concept of tradition being eroded away by advancement. Especially since I hunt. Which I would argue about the hunter being gone, I do agree about the loss of values and change. Well done. Only one thing I see cloths clothes (cloths reference fabric, clothes reference garments) Ju...

Welsh halfwit wrote:Any thought on this one?

Nope, I enjoyed the lost cause fighter story.

Only one thing that I suggest.

Probably his mother. Same as me.

Probably about his mother. Same as me.

Just my personal opinion, take it for what it is worth.

unless done intentionally with the character's thought's For them that don't know 'those who' instead of 'them that' livlihood livelihood keep wording consistent wi-fi vs. Wi-fi Some sentences are a tad long and could be broken up. Otherwise fun concept! Just my personal opinion, take it for what it...

Very nice concept and premise for a storyline. I am assuming that it was a dream sequence after he fell asleep on the bed. I would add one single line near the end as the dream sequences was realized. maybe after "it was only a prank..." Suggestion: it was only a prank... Glancing at the I...

Wow.. 12,500+ words... Little bit longer than a short story... Couple spots are kind of off... Use of bracketed sentences to denote background info/internal feelings, when you otherwise use italics for personal thoughts. Corona only vaguely recognized him, but based on his name he could only be Greg...

That's an expensive toy for an 11 years old :P It should be perfectly fine for playing TF2 if he isn't used to a high end gaming monitor (as I said: It's not different to a normal monitor). The only thing would be color management (as the 24" cintiq is AdobeRGB iirc you will have waaay too sat...