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So next page, Rose tries to kill Trace?

Excellent frustration.

Panel two lookin' good! Even though there's a bit of a contradiction in the action between the tail swinging and Maddie bracing against it without ending up with the same momentum

And this is totally going to be one of those things where they juke it and it goes through a wall, isn't it?

If you want writer's critique kind of stuff, I can refer someone who's qualified to give it, but if you want my own, inexpert reactions? Chapter one does an excellent job of laying characterization for our intrepid heroes the trio of "diplomats", and establishing motivations. Natani has t...

MuonNeutrino wrote: ↑Sun Oct 07, 2018 3:11 am Terrible shuffle inspired by a comment by BadFoMo in the comic thread. I apologize in advance....

Gahahahahahahaha. Sorry for the late reply, but I apparently haven't checked this thread in a while, and this really made me laugh

Chapter 3 out now! See OP. I don't necessarily bump the thread every time I update, so do check back once a day or so for new chapters. Or reply and say something, because then I have a reason to bump :P Ooooh, new Amenon things to read! Update: finished chapter 1 before bed. Will absolutely be read...

Happy Candlenights! Here's the latest I've been working on. I'm not quite done yet, but I'm currently trying to get the whole thing out over the holidays -- my present to my 2019 self. We'll see how that goes, but... here's what I have out so far, out of 6 chapters and an epilogue! Job done! What if...

Well, I retract my statement from last thread about the odd color of reflection-Mike's eyes just being from the blue water. Remains to be seen exactly what Tom means by that, but it's obviously on purpose. Huh, right you are. Blue in the side-hug, gray in the close-up. Evals may be being overconfid...

The ship-tease levels of panel 5 cannot be accurately measured with current instruments. We're going to need a scientific breakthrough. Also, we're going to need a whole new Tom to just draw an Evals family side story :grin: Now, this memory is obviously years old; are they still like this, or was h...

That's a dumb plan for any number of reasons -- but the presentation of it as anything but is mostly just a whole lot of Unwarranted Evals Optimism (TM) getting layered on top of that double-conditional ' might be able to pull some strings once the port's fixed', so that works as presented. The part...

Title text: Twokinds 15th Anniversary 2018

Thank you for fifteen long years, Tom

Happy anniversary!

(Very approve of Natani and Keith here )

Mike :heart: I hope he gets a hug out of Evals for his worries :grin: (I guess a supportive hand on the shoulder is slightly more likely, but... hugs! ) I think Evals is assuming that of course Mike will want to go with him, and Mike is assuming that of course Evals will want to go without him. And ...

I'd like to second Hayate (whether that counts for anything or not )

Another Twokindsversary, another instance of me catching up on janitorial work! Search has been caught up, and now covers up to page 1042 of the comic. Now that Twokinds is fifteen, search is just a few weeks away from its own fourth anniversary. While I (mostly by design) don't have much in the way...

CrRAR wrote: ↑Sun Sep 02, 2018 1:23 pm I agree it is a most equitable benefit-of-the-doubt approach to an otherwise-deserving Zen.

And I agree it would be if he were otherwise-deserving