Wow, aside from a bit of odd anatomy and grammatical bits, that's some really well done stuff there. The backgrounds are fantastic and the dark shading spawns a satisfying setting of dismal empathy.kiabugboy wrote:it is going to happen eventually
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- Sun Sep 20, 2015 10:34 pm
- Forum: Drawing Board
- Topic: the inevitable
- Replies: 12
- Views: 2141
Re: the inevitable
- Sun Sep 20, 2015 2:06 pm
- Forum: Story Board
- Topic: The Razor Edge [NSFW] [FFC'15]
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2916
Re: The Razor Edge [NSFW] [FFC'15]
Great, the good news is that in finishing the story, it as a whole it comes across magnitudes better than before. The less than stellar news is that you may have gone too far... I feel that the four paragraph epilogue you added there are the end is nearly entirely unnecessary. It adds nothing that w...
- Sun Sep 20, 2015 1:37 pm
- Forum: Story Board
- Topic: Fan fiction CONTEST!!
- Replies: 59
- Views: 11599
Re: Fan fiction CONTEST!!
Any individual critiques from here on I'll post in their respective threads. Gimme a few to update myself.MeaCulpa, S.C.M. wrote:Ok--it's done. See how you like it now. :]
- Fri Sep 18, 2015 3:02 am
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Comic for Thursday 09/17/15
- Replies: 52
- Views: 8054
Re: Comic for Thursday 09/17/15
The way Lynn has to drag Keith from the path of the fireball makes me think that the magic is from Sea and our timid little Templar impostor isn't as terrible as previously let on.
- Wed Sep 16, 2015 7:03 am
- Forum: Story Board
- Topic: Fan fiction CONTEST!!
- Replies: 59
- Views: 11599
Re: Fan fiction CONTEST!!
Whelp, with less than two weeks left in the contest and no updates since July~ish, here's my impartial, ametuer, and frankly unprofessional take on the stories promoted thus far. My critiques are sorted in no particular order. The Razor Edge by MeaCulpa, S.C.M. Very strong, easy to visualize start. ...
- Wed Sep 16, 2015 2:18 am
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Personal Inter-species Relations
- Replies: 57
- Views: 12915
Re: Personal Inter-species Relations
It also has to do with their general biology: Basitins don't experience sexual arousal the same way humans do, so until they acclimate to something (as Keith has with unbound ankles), they are forced to deal with constant, high-drive libido while in the presence of that stimulus. This is, of course...
- Tue Sep 15, 2015 1:43 am
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Personal Inter-species Relations
- Replies: 57
- Views: 12915
Re: Personal Inter-species Relations
I do believe I'll stay out of the general rabble and just stick to the topic at hand if I may. As for the breeding question regarding Kat, I would define "labor" rather broadly: you've presumably bred your sex slave for desirable aesthetic characteristics. Wouldn't you want to breed them t...
- Sun Sep 13, 2015 2:16 pm
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Personal Inter-species Relations
- Replies: 57
- Views: 12915
Re: Personal Inter-species Relations
http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lh68i0Ogyg1qafrh6.gif I'm erring on the side of non-acceptance with the overwhelming majority. We have a hard enough time accepting people who are of our own ethnicity, of our own communities, hell, sometimes of our own blood when they so much as have a goddamned unib...
- Sat Sep 12, 2015 10:01 pm
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Imagine this (before the final battle)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3337
Re: Imagine this (before the final battle)
Oh I can guarantee that a fair bit of the story, (especially some bits early on) were flat out made up on the spot because something sounded cool without much or any thought of, "Ok, now how and when am I going to resolve this?" Remember, he started this when he was like what, 16? And wit...
- Sat Sep 12, 2015 7:46 pm
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Imagine this (before the final battle)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3337
Re: Imagine this (before the final battle)
Historically it is quite unusual for a monarchy to go even a few minutes without a king. The king might not immediately know he's king (he doesn't know that his predecessor died)... but he is, nonetheless, king. And if the inheritance of the throne isn't immediately clear, the country typically doe...
- Sat Sep 12, 2015 6:12 pm
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Imagine this (before the final battle)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3337
Re: Imagine this (before the final battle)
Historically it is quite unusual for a monarchy to go even a few minutes without a king. The king might not immediately know he's king (he doesn't know that his predecessor died)... but he is, nonetheless, king. And if the inheritance of the throne isn't immediately clear, the country typically doe...
- Fri Sep 11, 2015 6:34 am
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Comic for September 10 2015
- Replies: 62
- Views: 10575
Re: Comic for September 10 2015
SperoWolf wrote:So you're innocent.Fubar de Lizzy wrote:I didn't even know that existed XD
That just leaves one suspect
While I certainly recognize that shade of blue, I got the lines from imgur.
- Fri Sep 11, 2015 5:31 am
- Forum: Story Board
- Topic: NSFW | Indwelling V2 - A TK Slash Fic
- Replies: 17
- Views: 4468
Re: NSFW | Indwelling V2 - A TK Slash Fic
No, I mean, I do see the story you're going for, but I think the parameters would need to be relaxed. Like, the whole cage and chains bit could be a bit of a show. Though if I did it myself, I don't think it would be about parading him around anyway [because that kind of 'fake' appease the masses b...
- Fri Sep 11, 2015 3:20 am
- Forum: Newbie Board
- Topic: sup guys
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1972
Re: sup guys
Welcome to the forums!
- Fri Sep 11, 2015 3:09 am
- Forum: Comic Discussion
- Topic: Comic for September 10 2015
- Replies: 62
- Views: 10575
Re: Comic for September 10 2015
Here, let me get the door.SperoWolf wrote:Hang a left and the exit will be straight aheadFubar de Lizzy wrote:Hey look, Keith's getting some tail
...I'll see myself out