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The suspense! All of the suspense.

"Snowpusad"- not sure why this cracked me up so much but i loved it.

Been rather busy and distracted lately but I finally got a part written. I should be following this one up quite a bit quicker then the last update and I'll try to get back in the rythem of posting consistently. I'm still not sure if I want to bring my story from the NWC into long term use. If I do...

You should try judging next time. Your critiques tend to be spot on.

I like the idea quite a bit, but i wish there was a modern soldier to fit my style better. If you are interested in a character build let me know. I can do back story and character description for any soldier. I studied military history in college and did a bit of time in the army myself so this is ...

Mysterious ruins and symbols being touched is always a solid way to transfer across or dramatic events. For example, civil war soldier gets shot by a cannon, thinks he dead, wakes up there.

Didnt realize your threads got unlocked. Go to old threads and see if you can edit your post and look for a red x to delete. Ive never had to take down a whole thread though so im not sure how that works.

Other threads got locked so stick to this one for a while.

Should have done this alot earlier but please let me know if you see something wrong in the story so i can quickly fix it.

Be sure to link in the comp. Thread. You forgot the nwc in your title but im sure if you link it youll be fine.

MeaCulpa, S.C.M. wrote:It's gonna be messy, but I'm gonna try to see if I can't chug something out fast enough before the contest is over.

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Goodluck, itll be nice to see more entries.

Because i like competition and helping, anything i can do to assist you finishing this and sticking it out? If so pm me and ill be sure to do what i can.

Ok, it is done. I've added the last part into the first post for easy copying over for grading. Just fyi i was thinking of using this for a full length story so you may see more after NWC. Best of luck to everyone doing NWC.

..was not sure what to make of this when i read your first post but now im finding myself eagerly waiting for updates. The mystery that being portrayed really grabs at you and makes you want more.

I may have missed it in the rules, but I don't think I did - Does the story have to have a definite ending? I don't believe it has to have an ending, but pretty much any good story will have some form of conclusion. It can be a cliffhanger or an unclear outcome, but I'd definitely include a conclus...