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Hey youre back, guess that means i should start up again too.

I see potential here. I like action and i feel like this will open up to quite a bit of it. With most of the things said in last pro/ cons post, he is right. The more you write the better you get though, as you go youll find more variety in your sentence structure as long as you keep it in mind. You...

Not the line up i was expecting, pleasant surprise and congratulations to the winners.

I've recently taken an extended brake from writing (lack of ideas) and would like to offer help to my personal favorite story on here. If you have anything from editing to whatever you can think of i would be more then happy to help.

I'm a big fan of Plush and Blood , as well as Slightly Damned . Both are pretty cool, and Slightly Damned looks reaaaaally good now. PB is okay, but not the best quality. Just finished plush and blood, great comic lloved it. One thing you might enjoy if you read it is to go read the incredibly lame...

Feb. Monthly update?

Only rule we've had issues with lately is posting in multiple threads, keep it all in one area and itll be fine.

Im a pretty bad critic but i tend to rate the stories here with 3 choices. If it was a book, would i buy it, not buy it, or burn it. This would without a doubt make a book worth buying.

Im sure this one has been brought up before but i just caught up to it, Bitter Sweet Candy Bowl. Very drama filled comic. Arts kinda cartoony but the story is very well done. If you are into a high school drama you might want to give it a shot. Let the Rain Come: The feels in that story, glad yall p...

Is the master judge feeling any better?

So this is a smaller update because I'm thinking about rapping up this story rather soon. Not sure if Im going to do a "book 2" kind of thing and just put it in the future or something but well see what goes on there. If you have any ideas on what to do after the conclusion of "book ...

So, problems? Same delay still lingering most likely, sure itll be up soon. *Points to the above while head lingers in the toilet.* I'll have everything posted in a few days. Holidays followed by work followed by illness. Sucks to be sick. At this point we all should be ok with waiting so worry abo...

He brings up a good point with known personality. Although the character does not have to be based on friends or family, it helps to build off familiar bases

For writing of any character, including the opposite sex, be sure to have a back story for them that you understand well. If you understand their backstory then you will have more natural reactions to events surrounding the character and you wont even notice what gender your character is, just how t...

unsteddyPhoenix wrote:So, problems?

Same delay still lingering most likely, sure itll be up soon.